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Post by hula hoop on Apr 26, 2012 21:13:42 GMT -5
CHARACTER NAME: Athenawhisper GENDER: She-cat AGE: 19 moons ALLIANCE: RiverClan RANK: Leader (then Athenastar),or deputy PERSONALITY: Athenawhisper, just like the Greek goddess, is a confident, pretty she-cat. She believes she fears nothing, when she really does. She is sweet, and smart, too. She is brilliant at fighting. However, her biggest weakness is water. Athenawhisper is totally terrified of the dark. She is a great leader, but is very deceptive. HISTORY: Athenawhisper was just a kit when her loner parents left her on RiverClan territory. She was taken in by an elder named Seashell. Seashell tought Athenakit the ways of RiverClan. When Athenakit became an apprentice, she already knew enough that she only had to do 2 moons of training. After that, Athenawhisper became a great warrior. She was one of the best fighters in RiverClan.
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Post by hula hoop on Apr 27, 2012 17:17:32 GMT -5
Finished.
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Post by Malicious on May 2, 2012 8:27:42 GMT -5
You'll have to talk to Twitchstar and Swiftfeather if you want to be a second deputy/leader. Also, the warrior cats believe in StarClan and few know about Twoleg things. Would it be possible to change her name form Athena? Athena is a Twoleg goddess, not a cat one. It seems highly unlikely that the Clan cats or even loners would know about Greek mythology. However, if you really want to keep her name, perhaps you could as Twitchstar if she could keep the first part of her name from her time as a Loner, and her Loners had overheard Twoleg stories.
Just change that, and everything else looks fine ^^
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